Audience Feedback

Here are some of the feedback we received from the class and peers to help us improve our video for the final piece.
N2S: (Add print screen from facebook, BB, filming of class, film of individuals responses)

Feedback on Music Video - First Draft

postive:

* clear storyline

* connotations of death via the use of black and white and depressing.

* great synchronicity 

* enigmatic - don't know who she is, makes you want to watch the whole video.

negative:

* one shot wasn't focused, unsteady camera

* "new girlfriend" - wasn't sure if she was a friend showing moral support or a new girlfriend

* unclear as to why the footage rewinded

*unclear sign reading

After our audience feedback, we realised that we needed to film again for one last time in order to fulfill their requirements.

Feedback on website:

Positive:

* Matches the music video and digipack

* Clear text

* Easy to navigate

* All relevant

* Great Transitions

Negative:

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(Captured from Sachins' Facebook)

Feedback on digipack:

Positive:

* black and white conformed to the stereotypical codes and conventions of an alternative genre

* clear branding

* high quality picture

Negative:

* could have used the guitar in the picture

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